With all the love in my heart
and tears in my eyes
all I can utter is a few words
"I love you" dear.....
If this strikes a cord within ur heart
If this brings tears to your eyes
pls give me the same words back
and break the ice!
Its been a stormy night,
with dreams of drifting apart from you,
but the morning sun said me
there's still a lof left to drift me towards you!!
You know its not my fault
I know its not yours
Our love was a scheme of God
Its 'He' at fault if at all!
Ur time is precious
my life is short,
What is the meaning of this discord?
It pains, It hurts when u keep this quiet
I loose the sense of wrong and right!
Forgive me, If i made a mistake
It ws only for my love's sake!
It ws only for my love's sake!
5 comments:
Hey cool one, but one may request to the beloved once or say twice. doing it again n again is not right ... Practically. Nyways quite a profound depth. Its like the thoughts one would have when some beloved is ready to move on.
Maybe Cummins??? ;)
Phew! you are deeply in love, I presume.
Your words, start poetically, but along the way, it more or less had become a conversation.
But there`s a lot of feeling in it, and so I just loved it!
Regards,
Srijith.
@ ajay...i always though it was u only who posted this anonymous comment....that time only u knew my blog address!! i dont know that if it wasnt you than who?
love is beautiful :)
Deepti u are so original and you really have gr8 insight..!!
I dont know what to say.. i have always tried to put strings together which will bring the joyfull music but somehow.. i felt i lacked motivation.. but now.. its so much more to look for...!!
The best part is u r also a CA!!!
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